I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Mrs Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, December 16, 2021
Tuesday, November 9, 2021
persasive writing
in room 11 we have been doing persaisive learning here is mine.
Introduction
I strongly agree that soccer is the best sport.There are
so many reasons, and I want to share some with you now.
My opinion is that soccer is a good sport to keep you fit
and improve your skills.
For example, you can get better at sprints. The
reason that you get better at sprints is
because you run around and gain more
stamina which makes you able to sprint for longer distances.
You can also have fun while
playing soccer. A good thing about it is you don't
realise that you're getting fit.
Another reason. You can score goals and you can win money
if you go into tournaments. I would use the money to buy
the model of the lambogini vishion gt
Reason3 when you win soccer games might get
muddy you get treats after the soccer games
You can make new friends for example, i
n my soccer team i made 6 new friends
or more. My team have never won a soccer
game but we got really close and that made me
keep going and keep training.
Thursday, October 21, 2021
Wednesday, September 29, 2021
Friday, September 24, 2021
Friday, September 17, 2021
Tuesday, September 14, 2021
Wednesday, September 8, 2021
Wednesday, September 1, 2021
Wednesday, August 11, 2021
My Hook
My Hook
ready set bang
everyone started running and jumping over the hurdles. I was coming second. I started sprinting as fast as a Ferrari then I came first place. My legs started aching as I take the lead. I can see the finish line. then someone starts to catch up I sprint then I take the lead again. Win for NZ.
Friday, August 6, 2021
Zander naritive story
in room 11 we have been writing about naritive story,s here is mine.
Crash! What was that? I Started walking down the road towards the haunted house. Then I went in and the lights were flickering on and off. When I walked on the floor it cracked. I then got into this massive room. I thought it was a bedroom, then the floor started creaking. I quickly turned around to face the door and I yelled ``who's there?” Then part of the roof fell on me. A ghost came rushing in. And then it started to help me. But the ghost couldn't help me.
Then we started to think about what could help me. We tried so many things until the ghost thought to use my phone to call my mum. But the ghost couldn't hold my phone. So I started to hold my phone and started typing my mum's number then I told her what had happened. Then she came in and saved me. THE END
Wednesday, June 30, 2021
Friday, June 25, 2021
Wednesday, June 23, 2021
Tuesday, June 22, 2021
Directions to the hub
in room 11 we have been working on directions.here is mine.
Directions |
The hornby hub |
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Wednesday, June 16, 2021
how to make hot chocolate.
in room 11 we have been writing on how to make a hot chocolate. here is my one
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Friday, June 11, 2021
alien space ship writing.
in room a 11 we have been desscribing a alien or a treehouse. here is mine.
I wake up and hear a massive crash from the forest next to my house. I get out of bed and go outside. That’s when I hear one of the twigs rushels in the tree. So I look up, there is nothing there. So I climbed up the tree and I feel an electric shock.
The next thing I know I am sitting in an alien ship in space as a meteor crashes into the ship. There are a lot of buttons and control pads. I feel really scared so I hop off my seat. The spaceship is massive with vents i think i could get out through there were red eyes.
Just then I smell something disgusting and I go into the alien cafe and then I see a massive red alien with razor sharp teeth with the slime coming off him. I go to one of the alien’s and say I am not an alien. So they take me back to my land. And found the real alien.
I told the world about my adventure with the aliens. Everyone thinks I am crazy.I get really sad and I want to prove it so I research when the last alien attack was... 2 years ago so I think I will have to wait 2 years….
...2 years later... I was right!! when I show people what the aliens were like, they say I was not crazy after all….
... and my grandchildren will have the same future. They will find aliens as well.
Friday, May 28, 2021
Friday, May 21, 2021
the viking village.
here is my work.
I came to a old looking village in a time. when i walked onto the wooden i suddenly started to warmer because of the fire of the stick.
When i walked past the skulls it felt like i was being watched by the skulls. Then i walked into a room and saw heaps of people in a circle and two viking fighting.
So i ran out thinking i would end up being part of the battle. when the fight was over a lot of shouting started and banging from metal turning into swords and shields.
A massive yell came from the corner of the village. a massive viking came out of the biggest house in the village and then they all started training for war .
That’s when i got sucked into my time machine and went home.
The village reminded me of a game.
Friday, May 14, 2021
life education.
Thursday, May 13, 2021
Friday, May 7, 2021
little red riding - Character description`
We have been righting and describing about little red riding hood.
LIttle Red riding Hood lives in a little cottage near the woods.
She has bright blue eyes and a red cape. A small and weak body.
Little red riding hood is very active because she likes to skip through the forest to her granny’s.
She is very thoughtful because when she saw the flowers she said grandma would like these.
I think she is nice, she would be a great friend but she is a bit forgetful.
Friday, April 16, 2021
Thursday, April 1, 2021
Friday, March 26, 2021
the present
22-3-21
Playing Call of Duty.
Mum came in with a box.
Opened box - dog had 3 legs - kicked it away.
Dog playing with a ball.
Dog are cute.H
I start to like him.
Call to mum - going to play outside.
Give the dog a name.
Last week I was playing Call of Duty at my house. I was playing with my friends and it was a sunny day. Then mum came in and gave me a present
Last week I was playing Call of Duty. The screen was bright. Then mum came in and said, it's a nice day outside why don't you go outside and play.
Then she said open this really big present that i thought was a call of duty figurine but it wasn't. I gave you. So I opened it and a small dog came out and pounced at me. I liked the dog then I realized it had three legs. I felt disgusted and angry that mum gave me a dog with three legs. So I put it down and kept playing.
Then the dog was chasing and tripping over to get the small ball
I was trying to ignore it but the small dog was too cute. And then I started feeling joyful but I tried to look back at the game but I kept looking. and started to the dog and put the ball next to me. At first I did not know if i wanted to go outside eventually i went out. I went outside with the dog and played ball with it. The End
Tuesday, March 23, 2021
Duffy theatre.
Last week Duffy came to the our school to do a play.
Duffy and Scruffy were stuck on Aunt's farm lock down. First Duffy was playing the guitar. Then they started the play.
Duffy tries to milk Moo Moo Molly. She gets very sad and hurts Duffy, then Scruffy throws Duffy in the chicken coop.
Aunty talked to the chickens,
Then Duffy's teacher called on zoom but she was on mute. She did not know she was on mute when she realized she un mute.
Then one of the school students was playing a round and left the call they realized it was jason. The teacher gave Duffy a book to read.
Dut Duffy did not like that book. So Duffy faked the wifi problems. Duffy quickly got to work. Then scruffy were putting Duffy on snap chat. Duffy got really annoyed when the book arrived from Duffy's mother. Scruffy hand sanitised the book.
Then Duffy got so annoyed and threw the tablets out the window, into the water. Then Duffy's mum told them to do jobs so they can earn new tablets.
Duffy went for a walk to calm down and then fell in the hole then he saw moa bones.
Just when Duffy needed company Bess came and his sister was saying stuff then Duffy shouted Scruffy and Duffy got pulled out with a rope that was connected to the tractor. And they took the bones to the museum and they realized. That it was a thousand years old. They became famous. THE END
My favorite part was when Duffy fell in the hole. I liked the way we could see the hole.
Friday, March 19, 2021
the tree.
i have been writing a one hundred word challenge. a hundred word challenge is a writing where you have to write 100 words.
I was walking down a forest with my family trying to find my way out when suddenly I heard a noise like an alien coming out of a spaceship when I went to the noise and there was a tree shaped like a man. When i turned around i heard a real loud noise i quickly turned around and the tree was GONE. so i told my mum but they didn't believe me so i told her to come with me to see if it was back when we found a way out it was there and i started running. Then a alien graded me and formed into a TREE. The end
hope you like it.
Saturday, March 6, 2021
Friday, February 26, 2021
The fun run
I went to Kyle park for a fun run the year 6 went first then the year 5 then the year 4. When I was running I had to run two laps of a really big field. Then I went down a water slide. Then we had to crawl under a net. Then I had to go under and above hurdles. Then we went into the bouncy castle. Then people had to let people throw wet sponges. Then we had to run on tyres. Then we could drink some water. Then we could have a break.



























