My Hook
ready set bang
everyone started running and jumping over the hurdles. I was coming second. I started sprinting as fast as a Ferrari then I came first place. My legs started aching as I take the lead. I can see the finish line. then someone starts to catch up I sprint then I take the lead again. Win for NZ.
in room 11 we have been writing about naritive story,s here is mine.
Crash! What was that? I Started walking down the road towards the haunted house. Then I went in and the lights were flickering on and off. When I walked on the floor it cracked. I then got into this massive room. I thought it was a bedroom, then the floor started creaking. I quickly turned around to face the door and I yelled ``who's there?” Then part of the roof fell on me. A ghost came rushing in. And then it started to help me. But the ghost couldn't help me.
Then we started to think about what could help me. We tried so many things until the ghost thought to use my phone to call my mum. But the ghost couldn't hold my phone. So I started to hold my phone and started typing my mum's number then I told her what had happened. Then she came in and saved me. THE END
