in room a 11 we have been desscribing a alien or a treehouse. here is mine.
I wake up and hear a massive crash from the forest next to my house. I get out of bed and go outside. That’s when I hear one of the twigs rushels in the tree. So I look up, there is nothing there. So I climbed up the tree and I feel an electric shock.
The next thing I know I am sitting in an alien ship in space as a meteor crashes into the ship. There are a lot of buttons and control pads. I feel really scared so I hop off my seat. The spaceship is massive with vents i think i could get out through there were red eyes.
Just then I smell something disgusting and I go into the alien cafe and then I see a massive red alien with razor sharp teeth with the slime coming off him. I go to one of the alien’s and say I am not an alien. So they take me back to my land. And found the real alien.
I told the world about my adventure with the aliens. Everyone thinks I am crazy.I get really sad and I want to prove it so I research when the last alien attack was... 2 years ago so I think I will have to wait 2 years….
...2 years later... I was right!! when I show people what the aliens were like, they say I was not crazy after all….
... and my grandchildren will have the same future. They will find aliens as well.

Hello Zander.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to reading your work.
Can you fix it so it goes down the page.Once you have done that I will then read it,and then leave a comment.
i have fixed it now
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