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Friday, June 11, 2021

alien space ship writing.


in room a 11 we have been desscribing a alien or a treehouse. here is mine.




I  wake up and hear a massive crash from the forest next to my house. I get out of bed and go outside. That’s when I hear one of the twigs rushels in the tree. So I look up, there is nothing there.  So I climbed up the tree and I feel an electric shock. 

 

The next thing I know I am sitting in an alien ship in space as a meteor crashes into the ship. There are a lot of buttons and control pads.  I feel really scared so  I hop off my seat. The spaceship is massive with vents i think i could get out through there were red eyes.


 Just then I smell something disgusting  and I go into  the alien cafe and then I see a massive red alien with razor sharp teeth with the slime coming off him. I go to one of the alien’s and say I am not an alien. So they take me back to my land. And found the real alien.  


I told the world about my adventure with the aliens. Everyone thinks I am crazy.I get really sad and I want to prove it so I research when the last alien attack was... 2 years ago so I think I will have to wait 2 years….

...2 years later... I was right!!  when I show people what the aliens were like, they say I was not crazy after all….

... and my grandchildren will have the same future. They will find aliens as well.








2 comments:

  1. Hello Zander.
    I am looking forward to reading your work.
    Can you fix it so it goes down the page.Once you have done that I will then read it,and then leave a comment.

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    1. i have fixed it now
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