My Hook
ready set bang
everyone started running and jumping over the hurdles. I was coming second. I started sprinting as fast as a Ferrari then I came first place. My legs started aching as I take the lead. I can see the finish line. then someone starts to catch up I sprint then I take the lead again. Win for NZ.
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OH NO,if you got first Zander,that means I got 2nd.I was the one running against you. Congratulations on your win.Maybe I will bet you next year.
ReplyDeleteWell done for including some powerful words.
Well done Zander. You have a quality piece of writing with good ideas and language features. By adding a few capital letters it would be perfect. Ka pai.
ReplyDeleteGood afternoon Zander.
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I was just checking to see if there was anything new.
Take care and keep safe.
Good morning Zander.
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Take care and keep warm.
Good afternoon Zander.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a message to wish you a happy week.Let Kenzie know that I am thinking of her too :)
Thanks.Take care and keep safe.