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Tuesday, November 9, 2021

persasive writing

in room 11 we have been  doing persaisive learning here is mine. 


Introduction

I strongly agree that soccer is the best sport.There are

so many reasons, and  I want to share some with you now.


 

My opinion is that soccer is a good sport to keep you fit

and improve your skills.

For example, you can get better at sprints. The

reason that you get better at sprints is

because you run around and gain more

stamina which makes you able to sprint for longer distances.

You can also have fun while

playing soccer. A good thing about it is you don't

realise that you're getting fit. 



Another reason. You can score goals  and  you can win money

if you go into tournaments. I would use the money to buy

the model of the lambogini vishion gt



Reason3 when you win soccer games might get

muddy you get treats after the soccer games


You can make new friends for example, i

n my soccer team i made 6 new friends

or more. My team have never won a soccer

game but we got really close and that made me

keep going and keep training.

6 comments:

  1. What a great piece of writing, Zander. You have a very strong introduction and your first paragraph for your first reason has lots of information that makes it easy for the reader to understand your view on Soccer. You have shown your own opinions well and have given a few personal reasons to back up your main reason. Tino pai!

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  2. You are going to have to be VERY good at soccer Zander-especially if you want to buy a Lamborgini-how much does one of those cost and what colour would you get?.

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  3. I am looking forward to reading your next post.

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  4. I can't wait to read your next post Zander.

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  5. The last week of school is here.I hope you have a great last few days of term 4 Zander :)

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