in room 11 we have been doing persaisive learning here is mine.
Introduction
I strongly agree that soccer is the best sport.There are
so many reasons, and I want to share some with you now.
My opinion is that soccer is a good sport to keep you fit
and improve your skills.
For example, you can get better at sprints. The
reason that you get better at sprints is
because you run around and gain more
stamina which makes you able to sprint for longer distances.
You can also have fun while
playing soccer. A good thing about it is you don't
realise that you're getting fit.
Another reason. You can score goals and you can win money
if you go into tournaments. I would use the money to buy
the model of the lambogini vishion gt
Reason3 when you win soccer games might get
muddy you get treats after the soccer games
You can make new friends for example, i
n my soccer team i made 6 new friends
or more. My team have never won a soccer
game but we got really close and that made me
keep going and keep training.
What a great piece of writing, Zander. You have a very strong introduction and your first paragraph for your first reason has lots of information that makes it easy for the reader to understand your view on Soccer. You have shown your own opinions well and have given a few personal reasons to back up your main reason. Tino pai!
ReplyDeleteYou are going to have to be VERY good at soccer Zander-especially if you want to buy a Lamborgini-how much does one of those cost and what colour would you get?.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to reading your next post.
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to read your next post Zander.
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend Zander.
ReplyDeleteThe last week of school is here.I hope you have a great last few days of term 4 Zander :)
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